I love the way you made Fallen Leaves transparent. However, Fallen Leaves facial features are slightly wrong. The snout should be more longer, ears shorter, bigger front paws, and the posture of the cat should be slightly more not bent. The spine looks a little too flexible. Hollyleaf. A lot better on Hollyleaf, I say. Snout resembles a bit like a dog. Make it a bit more rounder. Just a little, it feels too sharp. The nose slightly smaller. You did shading very well, and great background and lighting. Fallen Leaves eyes should be more like Hollyleaf's (as in shape).
I LOVE IT SOOO MUCH, Fallen Leaves ears are kinda big but other than that it's awesome! Great drawer. Also I like how you made the water and light... and the cave walls too, ugh this has to be at least 100 words so pardon the rest- i like pie pie is delicious, it wouldn't let me do random words ugh, i hate when it does that, i hate making these things when i could just put it in a comment but hey i like big fancy stuff.... whatever.... does this bow tie look cool oh yay almost the end.
~spoiler Alert!~ . . . . . . . . . Kate Cary confirmed on her Twitter that Hollyleaf and Fallen Leaves did love one another, and if they met in StarClan, they would be mates. She had earlier confirmed, however, that Fallen Leaves and Hollyleaf did indeed meet again in StarClan. ouo
Thi actually might be true in the last hope (hope its not much of a spoiler ^^') he broke out into tears an said he promised to see her again, for wut reasons he's crying I'm gonna say coz it's a Rly big spoiler